Monday, December 6, 2010

Free Response Essay Practice Test

Why are the trials and tribulations of Galileo often considered both predicative of the future of Western Civilization as well as a perfect encapsulation of the context of his own time?



Galileo sparked turmoil within the religious world, which would cause for him to be exiled and shunned by those who had been told otherwise. He was an Italian scientist, who created the telescope. Galileo's discovery with the telescope had caused controversy, and this discovery would be a considerably contradictory find, compared to what was already stated by previous scientists. Because of the past statements, Galileo had a hard time being taken seriously in the religious world. However, in the future, Galileo would become a worldwide known scientist who discovered the truth about how the solar system is set up in the Milky Way.
Galileo was the first to invent the telescope. He found many interesting facts about the solar system and how it really worked. Galileo also discovered that space did not revolve around Earth. Earth in fact revolved around the sun. This caused an uproar in both the scientific world as well as the religious world. It had been stated for a while that space revolved around Earth, and was known throughout Europe as being proven correct. However, this was controversial to what Galileo had actually seen. He had also figured out that the universe was a lot of mathematical equations and formulas. This is what caused the uproar from the theological world.
Because of this uproar in the theological world, Galileo was shunned and insulted by many. The religious leaders of the time had said that humans were at the center of everything. They had told the people that God had set them at the center of everything because they were so important. The people believed in the religious leaders and in God, and because God was all knowing and all powerful, they felt it was an insult to God and his knowledge and power to say that this was not true. The people wanted to believe that their lives were destined for something important, and what Galileo was saying was tarnishing that idea. Because of Galileo's controversial facts, he was exiled.
It seems that Galileo's trials and tribulations were predicative of the future of Western Civilization as well as a perfect encapsulation of his own time period. The future of Western Civilization and his own time was that of controversial statements and confusion among the people. Others had given controversial facts that had received an uproar from the theologians and scientists. These debatable discoveries were partially what caused all of the hullabaloo within the religious world. The scientists would discover something that would be disputatious towards what was stated by the religious leaders, and would cause turmoil for everyone.
Because of Galileo's discovery, there was controversy and disputes about whether it was true or not. The religious leaders had stated otherwise, but Galileo had seen for himself the truth. This discovery had caused so many disputatious arguments, which he would sadly pay for. Galileo was exiled and shunned for his factual statement, and because of the biased opinions of the people and leaders. His facts had been insulted and rejected by those who did not believe that there could be something different than was already told by religious leaders who did not actually see the truth for themselves, but instead believed in something that could not be proven correct.

4 comments:

  1. 7 the thesis statement and the last paragraph do not seem to match,, good job! :)

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  2. Seems like you have half a thesis statement. Don't start with a 'however'. That implies that something comes before. Put it all together in one whole and keep it specific. 3.5

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